ooli3@sopuli.xyzM to Revenge@sopuli.xyz · 26 days agoA man from Chicago...i.redd.itimagemessage-square26linkfedilinkarrow-up190arrow-down129
arrow-up161arrow-down1imageA man from Chicago...i.redd.itooli3@sopuli.xyzM to Revenge@sopuli.xyz · 26 days agomessage-square26linkfedilink
minus-squaredream_weasel@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkarrow-up2·25 days agoIf you got AABA: he left his/her car, (B) at the airport garage (B) And that produces AABBA, a limerick with bad rhyming.
minus-squareLeg@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkarrow-up2·25 days agoOh I totally see it now. Rhyming car and a garage, splitting line 3 into two lines. Dunno why I derped on that. So Chicago is a slant rhyme for trouble and yubble, and car a poor slant rhyme for garage. I think you’re right on the money.
If you got AABA:
he left his/her car, (B) at the airport garage (B)
And that produces AABBA, a limerick with bad rhyming.
Oh I totally see it now. Rhyming car and a garage, splitting line 3 into two lines. Dunno why I derped on that.
So Chicago is a slant rhyme for trouble and yubble, and car a poor slant rhyme for garage. I think you’re right on the money.